from Deb Clarke:
“Hostage Art is Cruel. Do not negotiate. Just keep doing it.” deb Clarke
and you can quote me on that!
I just did Deb!
If I give in, they win!
Only Days away from revealing the culprits
you can run but……….
My View of Life on the Dock
from Deb Clarke:
“Hostage Art is Cruel. Do not negotiate. Just keep doing it.” deb Clarke
and you can quote me on that!
I just did Deb!
If I give in, they win!
Only Days away from revealing the culprits
you can run but……….
“I just did Deb!”
Uh, Paul, you need a comma in that sentence. Otherwise it sounds like something else altogether….
“I just did, Deb!”
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Please Kathleen, Try not to take this post into the Gutter. I’m trying to behave.
Thanks for the writing tip.
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“Please Kathleen”
See! This is a perfect example of what I am talking about. However, I do think everyone should try to “Please Kathleen”…. I’m quite cranky when people fail to please me…
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Really (comma) I did pass english 1 and 2.
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you guys crack me up!
jenn
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Van Gogh, Cezanne, Degas, and now Frontiero. Many people world wide have offered rewards for these works of art to be returned so the least that I can do is offer to meet the demands if Paul will let me. I have put the offer out there and I’m willing to be the negotiator to end this cruelty.
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Ed! Please do not give in!
I refuse to have anything to do with these people who MOCK MY ROCKS!
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I would NEVER mock your rocks, Paul. However, your grammar is another matter…. ;o)
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I never claimed to be a writer. Please (bear or bare) with me. 🙂
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Not sure if a comma can fix it but that sentence needs work.
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i love to write and i love this thread. i’ve learned so much about the power of the comma.
it reminds me of a short film i saw on pbs: “A Word of Defiance”.
can you guess the word?
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